#16: Reconsidering the Eighth Point

Children’s educational toys are always a hit, especially a vet kit a young girl received for her 4th birthday. It taught her about animal care, including their diet and bacteria that cause illness, focusing particularly on the eighth point.

Indeed, the eighth point confirmed your thoughts. Although vital in animal care, perhaps its presentation needed a tweak? It’s essential, yet maybe it required a more delicate choice of words.